Twitter is changing the nature of business communi-
cation in a fundamental way—it forces people to write concisely.
The maximum post—or tweet—is 140 characters. Characters
include letters, spaces, and punctuation. For example, Jobs’s
description of the MacBook Air takes thirty characters, includ-
ing the period: “The world’s thinnest notebook.”
Jobs has a one-line description for nearly every product, and
it is carefully created in the planning stage well before the pre-
sentation, press releases, and marketing material are finished.
Most important, the headline is consistent. On January 15,
2008, the day of the MacBook Air announcement, the headline
was repeated in every channel of communication: presentations,
website, interviews, advertisements, billboards, and posters.
In Table 4.1, you see how Apple and Jobs consistently deliv-
ered the vision behind MacBook Air.
Most presenters cannot describe their company, product,
or service in one sentence. Understandably, it becomes nearly
Setting the Stage for the Marketing Blitz
The minute Jobs delivers a headline onstage, the Apple
publicity and marketing teams kick into full gear. Posters are
dropped down inside the Macworld Expo, billboards go up,
the front page of the Apple website reveals the product and
headline, and ads reflect the headline in newspapers and mag-
azines, as well as on television and radio. Whether it’s “1,000
songs in your pocket” or “The world’s thinnest notebook,” the
headline is repeated consistently in all of Apple’s marketing
channels.
CREATE TWIT TERLIKE HEADLINES 41
TABLE 4.1 JOBS’S CONSISTENT HEADLINES FOR MACBOOK AIR
HEADLINE
SOURCE
”What is MacBook Air? In a
Keynote presentation
sentence, it’s the world’s thinnest
notebook. ”2
“The world’s thinnest notebook. ”3
Words on Jobs’s slide
“This is the MacBook Air. It’s the
Promoting the new notebook in a
thinnest notebook in the world. ”4
CNBC interview immediately after
his keynote presentation
“We decided to build the world’s
A second reference to MacBook Air
thinnest notebook. ”5
in the same CNBC interview
“MacBook Air. The world’s thinnest
Tagline that accompanied the
notebook.”
full-screen photograph of the new
product on Apple’s home page
“Apple Introduces MacBook Air—
Apple press release
The World’s Thinnest Notebook. ”6
“We’ve built the world’s thinnest
Steve Jobs quote in the Apple press
notebook. ”7
release
impossible to create consistent messaging without a prepared
headline developed early in the planning stage. The rest of the
presentation should be built around it.
Today Apple Reinvents the Phone
On January 9, 2007, PC World ran an article that announced
Apple would “Reinvent the Phone” with a new device that com-
bined three products: a mobile phone, an iPod, and an Internet
communicator. That product, of course, was the iPhone. The
iPhone did, indeed, revolutionize the industry and was rec-
ognized by Time magazine as the invention of the year. (Just
two years after its release, by the end of 2008, the iPhone had
grabbed 13 percent of the smartphone market.) The editors at PC
42 CREATE THE STORY
World did not create the headline themselves. Apple provided it in its press release, and Steve Jobs reinforced it in his keynote
presentation at Macworld. Apple’s headline was specific, memo-
rable, and consistent: “Apple Reinvents the Phone.”
During the keynote presentation in which Jobs unveiled the
iPhone, he used the phrase “reinvent the phone” five times.
After walking the audience through the phone’s features,
he hammered it home once again: “I think when you have a
chance to get your hands on it, you’ll agree, we have reinvented
the phone. ”8
Jobs does not wait for the media to create a headline. He
writes it himself and repeats it several times in his presenta-
tion. Jobs delivers the headline
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